Tan Renga Challenge/ Jane Reichhold

Tan Renga Challenge
This is a wonderful poem by the well-known Haiku poetesses Jane Reichhold. I'm afraid that I want do this poem justice, but I'll try.




Melting into the sea
the full moon               (c) Jane Reichhold
leaves a candle bright

Against the black like blue hues
Lighting your way back to me





Thank you....CarpeDiem Haiku Kai

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6 comments:

  1. Lovely, you've married words and image exquisitely!

    melting into sea

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    1. I loved that picture, had it for a while and didn't know why I would use it. But it really did the job!
      Thank you jrb!

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  2. excellent melding in your entire, gorgeous post....

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  3. What an awesome continuation of this Tan Renga. Tahnk you for sharing SaFire

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    1. Thank you so much Kistjaan!

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