Overflow






 Take me down 
    To your free-flowing river
       Where sweet nectar
                         runs uninhibited   
               
 Take me to your joy 
   let pleasures grow
              Expectant, ecstasy
  
    I’m free with you
               to feast on you 
                             enjoying  your overflow




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3 comments:

  1. Miguel MontoyaNovember 15, 2013 at 11:06 PM

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    hey I like this ..
    does the poetry have to be erotic..?
    drop me a note and let me know the rules..
    thanks

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    1. glynis rankinNovember 16, 2013 at 11:21 AM

      I thank you Michael.
      No, I thought about adding it to a writing prompt, but decided against it. I left you a note on your G+ comment. Let me know if I can help with anything else. I'll send you a few of those challenges I use.

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  2. glynis rankinNovember 16, 2013 at 11:11 AM

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