Carpe Diem's/ Haiku Complete #2

Carpe Diem's Make the Haiku complete #2

Welcome my fellow  Haijin, visitors and friends!
We are challenged with an unfinished haiku by Basho

 tsuma kou te nezasa kazuku ya ..............

 missing a wife
the bamboo grass dives under
.............................

 My third line:

missing a wife
the bamboo grass dives under
where she hides from him

 

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2 comments:

  1. ChèvrefeuilleOctober 25, 2013 at 4:01 AM

    Nice third line Glynis ... it makes the haiku complete.

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    1. glynis rankinOctober 25, 2013 at 6:12 PM

      Thank you Kirstjann
      It's not as good as yours. One day!

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