Carpe Diem's Tan Renga Challenge Month # XXII, The Inner Zone's "sheets of waves cover''

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Carpe Diem's Tan Renga Challenge Month # XXII, The Inner Zone's "sheets of waves cover''
 The first stanza of this Tan Renga Challenge is from a friend The Inner Zone. She wrote a lovely Haiku. I hope I can add to her lovely words.


sheets of waves cover
asleep sea, lighthouse rotates
sparkling lullabies                            (c) The Inner Zone
 
 
  storms, wailing bairn
  siren song , calms

 


 CarpeDiem Haiku

Copyright © 2013 SaFire

12 comments:

  1. UnknownNovember 21, 2013 at 2:00 PM

    Ah the Siren creates her own storm
    nicely composed

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  2. AnonymousNovember 21, 2013 at 5:01 PM

    well penned and very creative ~ love the completion ~ 'calms' ~ thanks, carol, xxx

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  3. AnonymousNovember 21, 2013 at 10:24 PM

    I do love this but the sirens taking over the lighthouse?
    Isn't that somewhat like the lunatics taking over the asylum?

    an albatross calls on high

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    1. SaFireNovember 23, 2013 at 10:52 AM

      Actually , I was going with the song calming the wailing baby ( bairn) who caused the storm.

      Thank you Jrbhaiku

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  4. Gillena CoxNovember 22, 2013 at 7:49 AM

    Ah! those compelling songs of the siren sisters

    much love...

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  5. brudbergNovember 23, 2013 at 11:44 AM

    Those sirens in a lighthouse sounds a little menacing.

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    1. SaFireNovember 23, 2013 at 8:02 PM

      It seems I got this one wrong Bjorn, I was going for the sirens baby causing the storm.

      Thank for the read!

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  6. sunNovember 23, 2013 at 5:24 PM

    love how you included the word bairn - nice touch. ☺

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