Tan Renga Challenge/ Sun

 Haijin, friends, and visitors, to another Tan Renga Challenge!
This  haiku was written by Sun of Simply Charming.  I hope to do it justice with my words.



gathering seashells
while ocean tide rise and falls  (Sun)
two sisters bicker

Sunlight  parting pewter skies
 just yonder  Rainbow


 Carpe Diem Haiku Kai

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