Carpe Diem #320, Embrace


 Embrace


Awkwardly you stood
Arms accepting willing
Tears fell openly




Copyright © 2013 SaFire

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  1. a soothing embracing.. love the mystery in it.. what was the sorrow.

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    1. Still learning to do this as well as you Bjorn.
      Thank you

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  2. Wonderfully done SaFire ... a haiku (or senryu) full of emotions. Welcome at Carpe Diem Haiku Kai. I am your host and I hope to see more of your haiku here at Carpe Diem.

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    1. Thank you so much for the lovely welcome.
      Senryu? I must look that up, thanks for the knowledge.

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  3. 'awkward embrace'...yes, we've all had a few of these...well-said

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  4. Nothing like an embrace to release those tears.

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    1. True Maggie especially in the arms of an open heart.

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